The Echo Technique: Let Characters Misremember Each Other's Words
The Echo Technique transforms simple callback references into windows of psychological revelation. In Dostoevsky's 'Crime and Punishment,' Raskolnikov repeatedly distorts his conversations with Porfiry in his own mind, each misremembering revealing his paranoia and guilt more clearly than any internal monologue could.
The key is calibration. Too obvious a distortion breaks believability; too subtle and readers miss it entirely. Aim for the emotional truth of how the character heard the words. A mother who heard 'I need space' as 'I don't love you anymore' reveals her deepest fear.
Advanced application: let the reader witness the original conversation, then encounter the distorted echo chapters later. This builds trust with your reader as a co-conspirator who understands the characters better than they understand themselves.
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