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Classic Continuation Feb 14, 01:07 PM

The Creature's Confession: A Lost Chapter Found in the Arctic Ice

Creative continuation of a classic

This is an artistic fantasy inspired by «Frankenstein; or, The Modern Prometheus» by Mary Wollstonecraft Shelley. How might the story have continued if the author had decided to extend it?

Original excerpt

He sprung from the cabin-window as he said this, upon the ice raft which lay close to the vessel. He was soon borne away by the waves and lost in darkness and distance.

— Mary Wollstonecraft Shelley, «Frankenstein; or, The Modern Prometheus»

Continuation

He was soon borne away by the waves, and lost in darkness and distance. But the darkness did not claim him, nor did the frozen sea grant the mercy of oblivion he had so fervently sought. For the creature — that wretched assemblage of stolen limbs and pilfered organs, that monument to one man's magnificent and terrible ambition — found that even death would not have him.

The ice raft drifted northward through corridors of towering bergs that gleamed like cathedrals in the perpetual twilight, and the creature sat upon it as a penitent might sit in the nave of a church, awaiting a judgement that never came. He had spoken his last words to Walton with such conviction — the funeral pile, the ashes scattered upon the sea, the final extinction of that spark which Victor Frankenstein had so recklessly ignited. And yet, as the hours passed and the cold gnawed at him with a ferocity that would have slain any natural man ten times over, his unnatural constitution refused the invitation of dissolution.

"I cannot die," he whispered to the indifferent stars. "Even this — even this is denied me."

He attempted his pyre. He gathered what fragments of wood the ice yielded up — broken spars from ships long since crushed between the frozen jaws of the Arctic, driftwood bleached to the colour of bone — and heaped them upon the ice. But his fingers, those enormous and hideous instruments that had once closed around the throats of innocents, trembled as he struck the flint, and the wind, that eternal and merciless wind that howled across the polar waste, extinguished each feeble flame before it could take hold. Again and again he tried, and again and again the elements conspired against his self-annihilation, until at last he cast the flint into the sea with a cry that echoed across the frozen emptiness like the bellow of some primordial beast.

It was then, in the depths of his despair, that the creature perceived he was not alone upon the ice.

A figure approached from the north — impossible, for nothing human could survive in those latitudes — and as it drew nearer, the creature discerned that it was a woman, or rather the semblance of a woman, wrapped in furs so thick and layered that she appeared more bear than human. Behind her, a team of dogs pulled a low sledge across the ice with mechanical precision, their breath forming clouds that hung in the still air like small ghosts.

She stopped at a distance of perhaps twenty yards and regarded him without fear. This, more than anything, arrested his attention. In all his wretched existence, no human being had ever looked upon him without recoiling, without that instinctive contortion of the features that spoke more eloquently than words of the horror his appearance inspired. But this woman — her face dark and weathered, her eyes black as the Arctic night — merely observed him with the calm appraisal of one who has seen much and learned to be surprised by nothing.

"You are the one they speak of," she said, in a tongue he did not immediately recognise but which bore the cadences of the Saami people, those hardy dwellers of the northern reaches whom he had observed from afar during his long wanderings. "The one who walks the ice and does not die."

The creature stared at her. "You do not flee from me."

"Why should I flee? The ice teaches us that appearances deceive. The most beautiful formations conceal crevasses that swallow men whole. The ugliest, most twisted pressure ridges mark the safest paths." She pulled back the hood of her fur parka, revealing hair as white as the snow that surrounded them, though her face suggested she was not yet old. "I am Ánná. My people have watched you for three months now, wandering the pack ice. We thought you were a spirit. Some wished to leave offerings. Others wished to drive you away with fire and drums."

"And you?" the creature asked, and his voice, that terrible voice that had once pronounced the doom of the Frankenstein family, now carried nothing but exhaustion.

"I wished to speak with you. I have always been the curious one. My grandmother said curiosity would be my death. But she also said that about eating cloudberries before the first frost, and I have done that every year and yet persist." A ghost of a smile crossed her weathered features. "You are cold?"

"I am beyond cold. I am beyond all sensation. I sought death upon this ice, but it will not have me."

Ánná regarded him for a long moment, then turned to her sledge and began unpacking what appeared to be the components of a lavvu — the conical tent of her people. "Then you must come inside and have tea," she said, with the matter-of-fact practicality of one for whom hospitality is not a social grace but a moral imperative of survival. "Death may not want you, but the living have uses for those who endure."

The creature watched in mute astonishment as she erected the shelter with practiced efficiency, her dogs settling around it in a protective circle, their yellow eyes regarding the creature with considerably less equanimity than their mistress. Within the hour, a fire burned inside the lavvu — a small fire, fed with oil rendered from seal blubber, but to the creature, who had failed so utterly to kindle his own funeral pyre, the ease with which she coaxed flame from the reluctant materials seemed almost miraculous.

Inside, the warmth was extraordinary. The creature had to stoop nearly double to enter, and even then his great frame occupied fully half the space, but Ánná arranged herself opposite him with no more discomfort than if she were entertaining a neighbour of ordinary dimensions. She poured tea from a blackened kettle — a brew of dried herbs and something bitter that the creature could not identify — and pressed a cup into his enormous hands.

"Drink," she commanded. "Then tell me why a being who cannot die wishes to."

And so — impossibly, improbably — the creature told his tale. Not as he had told it to Victor Frankenstein, with the desperate eloquence of one pleading for compassion from his creator, nor as he had related it to Walton, with the theatrical grandeur of one delivering a final soliloquy. He told it plainly, haltingly, as one tells a story that has lost its power to shock even the teller. He spoke of his creation, of the laboratory, of the horror in his maker's eyes — that first and foundational rejection from which all subsequent miseries had flowed like tributaries into a great river of suffering. He spoke of the De Laceys, of his education, of his naive and ultimately catastrophic hope that the blind old man's kindness might extend to his family. He spoke of William, and Justine, and Clerval, and Elizabeth — names that fell from his lips like stones dropped into a well, each one sinking into a silence that seemed bottomless.

Ánná listened without interruption, her dark eyes fixed upon him, her face betraying no emotion save a deepening gravity. When at last he fell silent, she was quiet for a long time. The fire crackled. The dogs shifted and whimpered outside. The wind, that interminable wind, sang its hollow song across the ice.

"Your maker," she said at last, "was a fool."

The creature flinched. Even now, even after everything, the instinct to defend Victor Frankenstein — to honour the bond between creator and creation, however poisoned — persisted in him like a vestigial organ, useless but impossible to excise.

"He was brilliant," the creature said. "He conquered death itself."

"He conquered nothing. He fled from everything. A man who creates life and then runs from it is not a conqueror. He is a coward." She sipped her tea with maddening composure. "Among my people, when a child is born, the whole community takes responsibility. Not just the mother and father — everyone. Because we understand that a life, once brought into the world, is the world's concern. Your maker understood nothing of this. He thought creation was an experiment. A triumph of the individual will. But creation is a covenant. And he broke it the moment he looked upon you and felt disgust instead of duty."

The creature's yellow eyes — those dreadful, watery eyes that had gazed upon so much suffering, much of it of his own making — glistened in the firelight. "You speak," he said slowly, "as though I were not a monster."

"I speak as though you were a person," Ánná corrected. "Which is what you are, though assembled by different means than most. The reindeer does not cease to be a reindeer because it was born in a storm rather than in sunshine. You were born in a storm — a storm of one man's arrogance — but you were born nonetheless, and birth carries with it the right to exist."

"The right to exist," the creature repeated, as though tasting a foreign and exotic fruit. "I have never claimed such a right. I have only ever claimed the right to be seen, to be acknowledged, to be — " He paused, and when he spoke again, his voice was barely audible above the wind. "To be loved."

"And because one man could not love you, you concluded that the world could not."

"The evidence was substantial."

"The evidence was limited. You encountered perhaps a hundred humans in your miserable wanderings, and from this paltry sample you derived a universal law. My people number perhaps eight thousand. The Norwegians, the Swedes, the Finns — tens of thousands more. And beyond them, millions upon millions of souls you have never met and never will. You condemned the entire species based on the cruelty of a few."

"And what of my own cruelty?" the creature demanded, and now his voice carried something of its old terrible force, so that the dogs outside whimpered and pressed closer together. "I murdered a child. I brought about the execution of an innocent woman. I strangled the dearest friend of my creator. I killed his bride on their wedding night. What species would embrace such a being? What person of sound mind would extend to me the compassion I denied to others?"

Ánná set down her cup. "I am sitting across from you in a tent on the pack ice," she said. "I have heard your confession. I have not fled. Draw what conclusions you will."

The silence that followed was the longest of the creature's existence — longer than the nights he had spent in the hovel adjoining the De Lacey cottage, longer than the months of pursuit across Europe and into the Arctic. It was a silence in which something ancient and calcified within him began, almost imperceptibly, to crack.

"What would you have me do?" he asked at last, and it was the first time in his life that the question was not a demand or a threat or a plea, but a genuine inquiry — the question of a being who, for the first time, entertained the possibility that the answer might not be death.

"Come south with me," Ánná said. "Not far south — only to the coast, where my people make their winter camp. You will frighten them at first, as you frighten everyone. But the Sámi are a practical people, and winter is hard, and a being who cannot die and does not tire has obvious utility. You will chop wood. You will haul sledges. You will make yourself useful, and in making yourself useful, you will make yourself known, and in making yourself known, you will make yourself — perhaps — something other than what you have been."

The creature looked at his hands — those terrible hands, eight inches across the palm, stitched together from the flesh of the dead. Hands that had created nothing and destroyed everything they touched.

"You believe this is possible?" he whispered.

"I believe," said Ánná, pouring more tea with the unhurried grace of one for whom the Arctic night holds no terror, "that it is worth attempting. And I believe that is more than you had five minutes ago."

She was right. It was more. It was, in fact, everything.

And so the creature — nameless still, monstrous still, bearing upon his patchwork frame the indelible marks of his creator's sin and his own — rose from the fire and followed Ánná out into the Arctic night, where the aurora borealis had begun to unfurl across the heavens in ribbons of green and violet, as though the sky itself were being stitched together from fragments of light, assembled into something whole and strange and terrible and beautiful — much like the creature himself — and the dogs barked, and the sledge runners hissed across the ice, and for the first time since the night of his wretched birth in that charnel-house laboratory in Ingolstadt, the creature moved not away from the world of the living, but toward it.

Classic Continuation Jan 18, 12:49 PM

The Testimony of the Ice: A Lost Chapter from Walton's Journal

The Testimony of the Ice: A Lost Chapter from Walton's Journal

Creative continuation of a classic

This is an artistic fantasy inspired by «Frankenstein; or, The Modern Prometheus» by Mary Wollstonecraft Shelley. How might the story have continued if the author had decided to extend it?

Original excerpt

He sprung from the cabin-window, as he said this, upon the ice-raft which lay close to the vessel. He was soon borne away by the waves, and lost in darkness and distance.

— Mary Wollstonecraft Shelley, «Frankenstein; or, The Modern Prometheus»

Continuation

September 17th, 17—

I had thought my narrative complete when the creature departed upon his raft of ice, diminishing into that white and boundless expanse until he was but a speck against the endless pallor of the Arctic wastes. Yet Providence, in her inscrutable wisdom, has granted me one final chapter to record—a chapter which, though it chills my blood to transcribe, must be committed to paper lest my sister believe me mad when at last I return to England's shores.

Three days hence did we continue our southward journey, the men considerably restored in spirits now that the spectre of mutiny had passed and our course turned homeward. The ice had loosened its grip upon our vessel, and though progress remained arduous, we moved steadily through channels of dark water that wound between the frozen monuments of that desolate region. I spent my hours in contemplation of all that had transpired—of Victor Frankenstein's terrible confession, of the daemon born of unholy science, and of the profound questions their existence had awakened within my breast.

It was upon the evening of the third day that young Hopkins, our most keen-eyed sailor, called down from his watch with a voice trembling between fear and bewilderment.

"Captain Walton! There is something upon the ice—a figure, sir, and it moves not!"

My heart, which I had believed hardened against further shocks, commenced a violent palpitation within my chest. I seized my glass and ascended to the deck, where the crew had gathered in uneasy congregation. Through the lens I perceived what Hopkins had descried: a dark form sprawled upon a vast plate of ice some quarter mile distant. Even at such remove, I recognized the terrible proportions, the unnatural limbs extended in attitudes of final exhaustion.

The creature.

"We shall investigate," I announced, though every fibre of my being recoiled from the prospect. The men exchanged glances of profound reluctance, yet none dared contradict their captain. We lowered the small boat and four of us—myself, Hopkins, the surgeon MacTavish, and stalwart Peterson—rowed through the frigid waters toward that dreadful tableau.

As we approached, I perceived that my initial assessment had been correct. The being lay upon its back, those yellow eyes—which had so haunted my dreams since first I beheld them in the cabin where Frankenstein's corpse reposed—now staring sightlessly at the perpetual twilight of the northern sky. The countenance, if such it could be called, bore an expression I had not thought possible upon those hideous features: peace.

MacTavish, whose scientific temperament had drawn him to accompany us despite his terror, knelt beside the form with professional detachment.

"He is dead, Captain," the surgeon pronounced after his examination. "Some hours at least, perhaps longer. The cold preserves, but I should estimate he expired not long after we last observed him departing upon the ice."

"The funeral pile," I murmured, recalling the creature's final declaration. "He spoke of ascending his funeral pile and exulting in the agony of the torturing flames."

"There are no flames here, sir," Hopkins observed, his voice barely above a whisper. "Only the ice. The endless, merciless ice."

I contemplated the scene before me with emotions I found impossible to categorize. Here lay the author of such misery, the destroyer of the Frankenstein lineage, the murderer of innocent William, of dear Clerval, of the gentle Elizabeth. By every measure of justice, I should have felt satisfaction at his demise—relief that such a terror had been removed from the world of men.

Yet as I gazed upon that massive form, I found myself remembering not his crimes but his words—those eloquent, agonized declarations of loneliness that had issued from his lips as he stood over his creator's deathbed. I recalled his account of the blind De Lacey, of his desperate hope for acceptance, of the progressive destruction of his better nature by the relentless persecution of humanity. Was this not, in some terrible sense, as much victim as villain?

"What shall we do with it, Captain?" Peterson inquired, unconsciously employing the pronoun that denied the creature's personhood.

I considered the question at length. To bring the body aboard would invite superstitious terror among the crew—men already strained to the limits of their endurance. Yet to leave it here, exposed to the elements and the eventual curiosity of whatever explorers might follow our path, seemed equally impossible. The world was not prepared to know what Victor Frankenstein had wrought.

"We shall commit him to the deep," I declared at last. "As we would any sailor who perishes far from home."

MacTavish's eyebrows rose in evident surprise. "A Christian burial, Captain? For such a... being?"

"Not Christian, perhaps," I acknowledged. "But humane. Whatever else he was, he possessed a soul capable of suffering—and of reflection upon that suffering. That alone, I think, entitles him to some small dignity in death."

With considerable effort, we maneuvered the enormous form to the edge of the ice plate. I removed from my pocket the small prayer book I carried always upon my person—a gift from you, dear Margaret, given upon my departure—and read aloud such passages as seemed appropriate to the occasion. The men stood in uncomfortable silence, their heads bowed more from habit than conviction.

"We therefore commit his body to the deep," I concluded, adapting the familiar words, "to be turned into corruption, looking for the resurrection of the body when the Sea shall give up her dead."

We pushed, and the creature slid from the ice into the black waters below. For a moment he floated, those terrible features just visible beneath the surface, and then slowly, inevitably, he descended into the Arctic depths—into that cold darkness from which no man, nor any creation of man, shall ever return.

The men rowed back to the ship in silence. I remained at the stern, watching the spot where the creature had vanished until it was indistinguishable from the surrounding ice and water. My thoughts turned to Victor Frankenstein, to his warnings and his anguish, and I wondered whether his tormented spirit—if such things persist beyond the grave—might now find some measure of peace knowing that his creation had at last found its ending.

That night, alone in my cabin, I took up my pen to record these events. The candle guttered in the cold draft that found its way through every seam of our vessel, casting dancing shadows upon the walls. I thought of the creature's expressed intention to destroy himself upon a funeral pyre—to let the flames consume him until his remains "would afford no light to any curious and unhallowed wretch who would create such another." Perhaps the Arctic deep would serve that same purpose; certainly no natural philosophy could retrieve a body from such unfathomable depths.

And yet, as I write these words, I find myself troubled by a question that permits no easy answer. The creature had spoken of his desire to die, of his intention to seek out the most northern extremity of the globe and there end his miserable existence. But he had also spoken of the necessity of fire—of the complete destruction of his physical form lest another might follow Frankenstein's terrible example.

The sea preserves what fire would destroy.

I shake off such morbid fancies. The creature is dead; of this MacTavish is certain, and I trust his medical judgment. Whatever secrets lay encoded in that unnatural flesh, they are now buried beneath fathoms of frozen water, beyond the reach of any future investigator. The tale of Victor Frankenstein and his daemon shall remain known only to myself and, through these letters, to you, dear Margaret—a cautionary fable of ambition overreaching the bounds of wisdom, of science transgressing against nature, of the terrible consequences that attend the creation of life without the acceptance of responsibility for that creation.

September 19th, 17—

We have made considerable progress southward. The ice continues to relent before us, and the men speak now of home, of families waiting, of warm hearths and English soil. Their spirits have recovered remarkably from the travails of recent weeks, though I notice that none venture to speak of what we witnessed, what we buried in the Arctic waters. Perhaps they believe it all a fever dream induced by cold and privation. I shall not disabuse them of this comfortable fiction.

For myself, I find that my ambitions have undergone a profound transformation. That burning desire for glory which had driven me to these frozen extremities now seems the foolishness of youth, a vanity as dangerous in its way as Frankenstein's own overreaching aspirations. I no longer dream of discovery and renown; I dream only of your face, Margaret, and of the simple contentments of domestic life. Let others seek the pole; I shall seek only peace.

Yet sometimes, in the dark hours before dawn, I wake from dreams I cannot quite recall—dreams in which yellow eyes regard me from the shadows, in which a voice of terrible eloquence asks questions I cannot answer. What is life? What obligations does the creator bear toward the created? Is the abandonment of one's progeny a greater sin than the act of creation itself?

I have no answers, dear sister. I possess only questions, and the profound conviction that some doors, once opened, can never be fully closed again. Victor Frankenstein opened such a door, and though he and his creation have both passed beyond the realm of mortal concern, I cannot shake the feeling that the questions they raised shall haunt humanity long after their names are forgotten.

The creature asked me, in those final moments, to record his tale—to ensure that the world might know not merely what he had done, but what had been done to him. I have honored that request within these letters, though I know not whether any shall believe the account when at last you read it. Perhaps it is better that they do not; perhaps such knowledge is too terrible to bear.

We sail southward, toward warmth, toward home, toward the forgetting that time inevitably brings. But I shall not forget. The creature's final words echo still within my memory: "I shall die, and what I now feel be no longer felt. Soon these burning miseries will be extinct." So he believed, and so it has proved. His miseries are indeed extinct, quenched by the cold embrace of Arctic waters.

But the misery of knowledge—of knowing what humanity is capable of creating, and of the terrible consequences that attend the abdication of responsibility—this, I fear, shall burn within me until my own dying day.

Your devoted brother,
R. Walton

P.S. I have sealed these letters within the strongest chest I possess, with instructions that they be delivered to you unopened should any mishap befall me before I reach England's shores. Guard them carefully, Margaret. They contain truths that the world may not be ready to receive—and warnings that future generations may desperately need to hear.

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