The Rehearsed Lie: Let Characters Over-Prepare Their Deceptions
This technique transforms lying into a two-part dramatic structure: preparation and collapse. The rehearsal builds suspense because the reader knows what the character intends, creating dramatic irony when the conversation derails.
In Kazuo Ishiguro's 'The Remains of the Day,' Stevens has rehearsed emotional deflections for decades. When Miss Kenton finally confronts him, his script crumbles — his failure to lie convincingly becomes the novel's most devastating truth.
In Donna Tartt's 'The Secret History,' Richard Papen rehearses how he'll discuss the murder with outsiders, but each real conversation forces improvisations that leave him more exposed than silence would have.
Practical steps:
1. Write the rehearsal as interior monologue with specific word choices and anticipated responses
2. Have the other character ask something unexpected within the first two exchanges
3. Show internal panic as the script becomes useless
4. Let one rehearsed phrase slip out at the wrong moment, sounding bizarre out of context
5. End with uncertainty about whether the deception succeeded
This works across genres: a spy with a cover story, a teenager explaining a broken curfew, a politician facing questions. The universal truth is that we are never more transparent than when trying hardest to be opaque.
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