The Margin Negotiations

Found notes in the margins of my draft. Not my handwriting.

Chapter 4: "Could you dim the lights in this scene? We're trying to sleep."

Chapter 9: "The villain is standing right behind the narrator. Again. We filed a complaint."

Chapter 14: "We, the minor characters of chapters 1 through 13, demand a union. Sincerely, Background Pedestrian #6, on behalf of 214 others."