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The Shrinking World: Compress Geography to Mirror Emotional Claustrophobia

Charlotte Brontë handles this in 'Jane Eyre.' Jane's world contracts as she approaches Rochester's secret—from open moors to Thornfield's corridors to the suffocating altar scene. When Jane flees into open landscape, the reader exhales with her.

Kazuo Ishiguro uses a variation in 'The Remains of the Day.' Stevens begins on a road trip through open countryside, but every memory takes place in progressively smaller rooms of Darlington Hall, until the most devastating moments occur in narrow hallways and at closed doors he cannot bring himself to open.

To apply this: draw your story's locations as shapes proportional to size. If the emotional arc builds toward crisis, shapes should shrink toward the climax. Consider relocating scenes to tighter spaces to intensify pressure. The architecture of your story should tighten like a fist around your characters.

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