The Efficient Funeral
Editor's note on chapter 7: 'This section drags.'
Chapter 7 is the grandmother's funeral.
'Could the mourning be faster?'
Rewrote. Grandmother buried in two paragraphs.
New note: 'Now add more emotion.'
She's already underground, Margaret.
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