Tip Feb 5, 09:20 AM

The Interrupted Action: Break Scenes at Points of Maximum Tension

The interrupted action technique traces back to serialized fiction, where Dickens needed readers to return for the next installment. But modern masters have refined it.

In Cormac McCarthy's 'No Country for Old Men,' entire confrontations happen off-page. We see setup, then cut to aftermath. McCarthy trusts readers to fill the gap with something more terrifying than he could write.

The key distinction: this isn't a cheap cliffhanger. You're not withholding information arbitrarily. You're recognizing that some moments gain power through absence. The unseen punch lands harder than the described one.

When implementing this, consider what emotion you want to amplify. Fear works best when the threat is imminent but unseen. Romantic tension peaks before the kiss, not after. Anger is most powerful when the character's response is withheld.

Avoid overuse—if every scene ends mid-action, readers become numb. Reserve it for pivotal moments, perhaps three or four times in a novel.

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